
In the review, Owen nods to Erin's story "Wednesday Night Reflections, Edited Thursday" as an example of one of the form-playing stories:
Originally published in Quarter After Eight, "Wednesday Night Reflections, Edited Thursday" is also in The Floating Order.
"Erin Pringle's 'Wednesday Night Reflections, Edited Thursday' is a series of short sections describing a troubled relationship: The sections are written with such an attention to emotional detail that the sum of the story's parts is devastatingly precise."
Originally published in Quarter After Eight, "Wednesday Night Reflections, Edited Thursday" is also in The Floating Order.